Identify every error that you can find in the letter below,

Identify every error that you can find in the letter below, and discuss why this is an error in your opinion.

Your submission can be in paragraph format or bullet format. List at least twenty errors ( and your opinion why these are errors).

If you received this email what would you do?

Hello my dear

I know that this mail will come to you as a surprise. I am

Barrister,Morris Adams, I have a client Mr.Jeffrey, who bears the same

last name with you and a national of your Country, who was a Director

of Orient construction company here in Benin Republic before he died

of Leukemia on 3rd of March 2010 in Benin Medical Center, Since then I

have made several enquirers to your Embassy to locate any of my

client’s extended relatives, this has also proved unsuccessful.

After these several unsuccessful attempts, I decided to trace his

relatives over the internet, to locate any member of his family but of

no avail. I have contacted you to assist me morally and financially in

repatriating the money left behind by my late client before they get

confiscated or declared non-serviceable by the Bank where these huge

deposits were lodged. Particularly,the Bank where the deceased had a

valued amount of Twelve Million USA Dollars ($12,000,000 US D) has

issued me a notice to provide the next-of- kin or have the Funds

confiscated within the next ten official working days.

Since I have been unsuccessful in locating the relatives for over Five

years now, I seek your consent to present you as the next of kin to

the deceased so that the proceeds of this Fund valued about Twelve

Million USA ($12,000,000 US D) can be paid to you and then you and I

can share the money,50% to me and 50% for you. I will work out all the

necessary legal documents that can be used to back up this claim , all

I require is your honest co-operation to enable us see this

transaction through. I guarantee that this will be executed under a

legitimate arrangement that will protect you from any breach of the

law, remember the secrecy of this transaction is as well as the

success of it,

To acknowledge receipt of this message in acceptance of my mutual

business endeavor,

Please furnish me with the followings:

Your Full Name:

Address:

Age:

Occupation:

Mobile Number:

Copy of your id cards.

Kindly get in touch with me by my secured and confidential email

address at:(barristermorrisadams1@consultant.com) and do not forget to

send me your direct telephone number, so that I can put a call through

to you for an extensive discussion on this deal.

Anticipating your prompt response.

Yours in service,

Barrister: Morris Adams.